tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16816094.post711381232598493994..comments2023-05-05T08:16:56.970-06:00Comments on An Amateur Christian Journalist's Insights: Allegrahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13835592075776262704noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16816094.post-45933428801924849912007-06-27T10:34:00.000-06:002007-06-27T10:34:00.000-06:00Thanks for the helpful comments. Glad you liked it...Thanks for the helpful comments. Glad you liked it. Yeah, be careful with the ice cream. :PAllegrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13835592075776262704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16816094.post-6030164161194746792007-06-21T13:26:00.000-06:002007-06-21T13:26:00.000-06:00Good job. I like how you lead into the paper with ...Good job. I like how you lead into the paper with dominos example in the first paragraph. It was very well written.<BR/><BR/>On thing I noticed was that in a few parts you broke into using first person. I don't know how your class is, but generally research papers are all third person.<BR/><BR/>I like it a lot though, it was very interesting. Now I'm freaked out about going to a hospital. I better cut down on all that ice cream...Mark Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02300473800616803439noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16816094.post-73996463604001135242007-06-15T15:40:00.000-06:002007-06-15T15:40:00.000-06:00Sure. :-)Sure. :-)Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12916967398518973337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16816094.post-91967363924297617172007-06-15T08:38:00.000-06:002007-06-15T08:38:00.000-06:00LOL! Actually, that was the point of several books...LOL! Actually, that was the point of several books I read while researching this. However, you have given me an idea...my paper is too short, so I'll add in that part about needing to stay healthy until the shortage crisis goes away. Sound good?Allegrahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13835592075776262704noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-16816094.post-3015509978999731922007-06-15T00:11:00.000-06:002007-06-15T00:11:00.000-06:00Guess we'll have to stay healthy.....Kind of inter...Guess we'll have to stay healthy.....<BR/><BR/>Kind of interesting that you post this, and Mark posts about large people on oxygen ordering large quantities of blizzards and brownie earthquakes at dary queen. We've got a health crisis AND a nurse shortage. Double whammy! :-/Unknownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12916967398518973337noreply@blogger.com